Part IV Error Correction

　　1. in first paragraph > in the first paragraph

　　2. ultimate > ultimately

　　3. acceptance > unacceptance / rejection

　　4. end > ending

　　5. upon > for

　　6. will pick up > will not pick up

　　7. listing > list

　　8. Keep up > Keep

　　9. taking > taken

　　10. find > found